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[EURO-Discuss] EURALO tri-fold brochure
Posted November 4th, 2009 by Mailing list user
Dear EURALO Members:
Those of you at Seoul or who participated in the EURALO
teleconference last week will remember a discussion about
improving the EURALO flyer and in particular making it a tri-fold
leaflet, with more attractive graphics and a new title.
I am happy to say that the PDF is attached and personally I think
it looks very good.
We will assume that this is OK to print if we don't hear anything
to the contrary BEFORE 7th November. We would not rush you, but
the IGF is coming up, and we need time to print the leaflet and
get it to the IGF with our colleagues that are attending.
--
Regards,
Nick Ashton-Hart
Director, At-Large
ICANN
Office Tel: +33 (450) 40 46 88
Office Fax: +41 (22) 594 8544
Mobile: +41 (79) 595 5468
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[EURO-Discuss] EURALO tri-fold brochure
Dear Nick,
Thanks a lot for this nice piece of work!
I think the tri-fold layout works really well, and the text is enjoyably
short and snappy.
I have a few minor suggestions:
Page 1:
On the cover, include EURALO under INTERNET CORPORATION FOR ASSIGNED NAMES
AND NUMBERS
(this would make it easier to identify at first glance what this flyer is
about, e.g. when people visit an ICANN booth).
Under "At-Large", change "on this website" to "on the website
www.atlarge.icann.org"
Page 2:
Under "Who we are", change "Internet-related civil society and consumer
interersts" to "Internet-related civil society and consumer groups"
Under "Democratizing ICANN", delete "...and many more"
These are my two cents 8-)
Heike
----- Original Message -----
From: "Nick Ashton-Hart"
To:
Sent: Wednesday, November 04, 2009 4:57 AM
Subject: [EURO-Discuss] EURALO tri-fold brochure
> Dear EURALO Members:
>
> Those of you at Seoul or who participated in the EURALO
> teleconference last week will remember a discussion about
> improving the EURALO flyer and in particular making it a tri-fold
> leaflet, with more attractive graphics and a new title.
>
> I am happy to say that the PDF is attached and personally I think
> it looks very good.
>
> We will assume that this is OK to print if we don't hear anything
> to the contrary BEFORE 7th November. We would not rush you, but
> the IGF is coming up, and we need time to print the leaflet and
> get it to the IGF with our colleagues that are attending.
> --
> Regards,
>
> Nick Ashton-Hart
> Director, At-Large
> ICANN
> Office Tel: +33 (450) 40 46 88
> Office Fax: +41 (22) 594 8544
> Mobile: +41 (79) 595 5468
> USA Tel: +1 (202) 657-5460
> email: nick.ashton-hart@icann.org
> Win IM: ashtonhart@hotmail.com / AIM/iSight: nashtonhart@mac.com / Skype:
> nashtonhart
> Online Bio: https://www.linkedin.com/in/ashtonhart
>
>
>
>
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[EURO-Discuss] EURALO tri-fold brochure
Hello Nick,
great result! Congratulations to all involved.
I support what Heike (and others) said below, although I would humbly
disagree on one thing.
Heike writes:
> Under "Who we are", change "Internet-related civil society and consumer
> interests" to "Internet-related civil society and consumer groups"
I am unsure which of those two we wish to say - because they have different
meanings.
If the word "groups" was used, it would effectively bound our reach to civil
society and consumer groups.
If the word "interests" was used, this could extend to any consumer
interests, even those outside the bound of actual consumer groups.
Which one do we wish to pursue? Or do we wish to change this sentence
altogether to remove the ambiguity?
Many thanks,
Olivier
----- Original Message -----
From: "Heike Jensen"
To: "Discussion for At-Large Europe"
Sent: Wednesday, November 04, 2009 3:04 PM
Subject: Re: [EURO-Discuss] EURALO tri-fold brochure
> Dear Nick,
>
> Thanks a lot for this nice piece of work!
> I think the tri-fold layout works really well, and the text is enjoyably
> short and snappy.
>
> I have a few minor suggestions:
>
> Page 1:
>
> On the cover, include EURALO under INTERNET CORPORATION FOR ASSIGNED NAMES
> AND NUMBERS
> (this would make it easier to identify at first glance what this flyer is
> about, e.g. when people visit an ICANN booth).
>
> Under "At-Large", change "on this website" to "on the website
> www.atlarge.icann.org"
>
> Page 2:
>
> Under "Who we are", change "Internet-related civil society and consumer
> interersts" to "Internet-related civil society and consumer groups"
>
> Under "Democratizing ICANN", delete "...and many more"
>
>
> These are my two cents 8-)
> Heike
>
>
> ----- Original Message -----
> From: "Nick Ashton-Hart"
> To:
> Sent: Wednesday, November 04, 2009 4:57 AM
> Subject: [EURO-Discuss] EURALO tri-fold brochure
>
>
>> Dear EURALO Members:
>>
>> Those of you at Seoul or who participated in the EURALO
>> teleconference last week will remember a discussion about
>> improving the EURALO flyer and in particular making it a tri-fold
>> leaflet, with more attractive graphics and a new title.
>>
>> I am happy to say that the PDF is attached and personally I think
>> it looks very good.
>>
>> We will assume that this is OK to print if we don't hear anything
>> to the contrary BEFORE 7th November. We would not rush you, but
>> the IGF is coming up, and we need time to print the leaflet and
>> get it to the IGF with our colleagues that are attending.
>> --
>> Regards,
>>
>> Nick Ashton-Hart
>> Director, At-Large
>> ICANN
>> Office Tel: +33 (450) 40 46 88
>> Office Fax: +41 (22) 594 8544
>> Mobile: +41 (79) 595 5468
>> USA Tel: +1 (202) 657-5460
>> email: nick.ashton-hart@icann.org
>> Win IM: ashtonhart@hotmail.com / AIM/iSight: nashtonhart@mac.com / Skype:
>> nashtonhart
>> Online Bio: https://www.linkedin.com/in/ashtonhart
>>
>>
>>
>>
>
>
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[EURO-Discuss] EURALO tri-fold brochure
Dear All,
Thanks for your comments, Heike. I also think the tri-fold works very well. I agree with your suggested changes and would suggest the following additional changes:
Page 1:
On the cover, change color of INTERNET CORPORATION FOR ASSIGNED NAMES AND NUMBERS from yellow to white.
On the cover, replace the orange color (color of AFRALO) with white.
Under "What people say about us":
In the quote by Christopher, replace "ALS" with "At-Large Structure".
In the quote by Christopher, 5th line, do not hyphenate "participation".
In the quote by Olivier, 3rd line, do not hyphenate "constituency".
In the quote by Veronica, insert a double quote (") at the beginning of her quote.
In the quote by Wolf, 4th line, replace "understood" with "understand".
Under section beginning "At-Large":
3rd line - replace "groups" with "At-Large Structures"
Page 2:
Move heading and text under "Our Hot Issues" to top of next column where these issues are outlined.
Under "Your Internet, Your Language", 3rd line, do not hyphenate "EURALO".
Under "From IPv4 to IPv6", do not hyphenate "addressing".
Let me know what you think!
Kind regards,
Heidi
-----Original Message-----
From: euro-discuss-bounces@atlarge-lists.icann.org [mailto:euro-discuss-bounces@atlarge-lists.icann.org] On Behalf Of Heike Jensen
Sent: Wednesday, November 04, 2009 6:04 AM
To: Discussion for At-Large Europe
Subject: Re: [EURO-Discuss] EURALO tri-fold brochure
Dear Nick,
Thanks a lot for this nice piece of work!
I think the tri-fold layout works really well, and the text is enjoyably
short and snappy.
I have a few minor suggestions:
Page 1:
On the cover, include EURALO under INTERNET CORPORATION FOR ASSIGNED NAMES
AND NUMBERS
(this would make it easier to identify at first glance what this flyer is
about, e.g. when people visit an ICANN booth).
Under "At-Large", change "on this website" to "on the website
www.atlarge.icann.org"
Page 2:
Under "Who we are", change "Internet-related civil society and consumer
interersts" to "Internet-related civil society and consumer groups"
Under "Democratizing ICANN", delete "...and many more"
These are my two cents 8-)
Heike
----- Original Message -----
From: "Nick Ashton-Hart"
To:
Sent: Wednesday, November 04, 2009 4:57 AM
Subject: [EURO-Discuss] EURALO tri-fold brochure
> Dear EURALO Members:
>
> Those of you at Seoul or who participated in the EURALO
> teleconference last week will remember a discussion about
> improving the EURALO flyer and in particular making it a tri-fold
> leaflet, with more attractive graphics and a new title.
>
> I am happy to say that the PDF is attached and personally I think
> it looks very good.
>
> We will assume that this is OK to print if we don't hear anything
> to the contrary BEFORE 7th November. We would not rush you, but
> the IGF is coming up, and we need time to print the leaflet and
> get it to the IGF with our colleagues that are attending.
> --
> Regards,
>
> Nick Ashton-Hart
> Director, At-Large
> ICANN
> Office Tel: +33 (450) 40 46 88
> Office Fax: +41 (22) 594 8544
> Mobile: +41 (79) 595 5468
> USA Tel: +1 (202) 657-5460
> email: nick.ashton-hart@icann.org
> Win IM: ashtonhart@hotmail.com / AIM/iSight: nashtonhart@mac.com / Skype:
> nashtonhart
> Online Bio: https://www.linkedin.com/in/ashtonhart
>
>
>
>
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[EURO-Discuss] EURALO tri-fold brochure
I support both Heike's and Heidi's comments. The brochure looks really good,
well done!
Dessi
> Dear All,
>
> Thanks for your comments, Heike. I also think the tri-fold works very well.
> I agree with your suggested changes and would suggest the following
> additional changes:
>
> Page 1:
>
> On the cover, change color of INTERNET CORPORATION FOR ASSIGNED NAMES AND
> NUMBERS from yellow to white.
>
> On the cover, replace the orange color (color of AFRALO) with white.
>
>
> Under "What people say about us":
>
> In the quote by Christopher, replace "ALS" with "At-Large Structure".
>
> In the quote by Christopher, 5th line, do not hyphenate "participation".
>
> In the quote by Olivier, 3rd line, do not hyphenate "constituency".
>
> In the quote by Veronica, insert a double quote (") at the beginning of her
> quote.
>
> In the quote by Wolf, 4th line, replace "understood" with "understand".
>
>
> Under section beginning "At-Large":
>
> 3rd line - replace "groups" with "At-Large Structures"
>
>
> Page 2:
> Move heading and text under "Our Hot Issues" to top of next column where
> these issues are outlined.
>
> Under "Your Internet, Your Language", 3rd line, do not hyphenate "EURALO".
>
> Under "From IPv4 to IPv6", do not hyphenate "addressing".
>
>
> Let me know what you think!
>
> Kind regards,
> Heidi
>
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: euro-discuss-bounces@atlarge-lists.icann.org
> [mailto:euro-discuss-bounces@atlarge-lists.icann.org] On Behalf Of Heike
> Jensen Sent: Wednesday, November 04, 2009 6:04 AM
> To: Discussion for At-Large Europe
> Subject: Re: [EURO-Discuss] EURALO tri-fold brochure
>
> Dear Nick,
>
> Thanks a lot for this nice piece of work!
> I think the tri-fold layout works really well, and the text is enjoyably
> short and snappy.
>
> I have a few minor suggestions:
>
> Page 1:
>
> On the cover, include EURALO under INTERNET CORPORATION FOR ASSIGNED NAMES
> AND NUMBERS
> (this would make it easier to identify at first glance what this flyer is
> about, e.g. when people visit an ICANN booth).
>
> Under "At-Large", change "on this website" to "on the website
> www.atlarge.icann.org"
>
> Page 2:
>
> Under "Who we are", change "Internet-related civil society and consumer
> interersts" to "Internet-related civil society and consumer groups"
>
> Under "Democratizing ICANN", delete "...and many more"
>
>
> These are my two cents 8-)
> Heike
>
>
> ----- Original Message -----
> From: "Nick Ashton-Hart"
> To:
> Sent: Wednesday, November 04, 2009 4:57 AM
> Subject: [EURO-Discuss] EURALO tri-fold brochure
>
> > Dear EURALO Members:
> >
> > Those of you at Seoul or who participated in the EURALO
> > teleconference last week will remember a discussion about
> > improving the EURALO flyer and in particular making it a tri-fold
> > leaflet, with more attractive graphics and a new title.
> >
> > I am happy to say that the PDF is attached and personally I think
> > it looks very good.
> >
> > We will assume that this is OK to print if we don't hear anything
> > to the contrary BEFORE 7th November. We would not rush you, but
> > the IGF is coming up, and we need time to print the leaflet and
> > get it to the IGF with our colleagues that are attending.
> >
> > Nick Ashton-Hart
> > Director, At-Large
> > ICANN
> > Office Tel: +33 (450) 40 46 88
> > Office Fax: +41 (22) 594 8544
> > Mobile: +41 (79) 595 5468
> > USA Tel: +1 (202) 657-5460
> > email: nick.ashton-hart@icann.org
> > Win IM: ashtonhart@hotmail.com / AIM/iSight: nashtonhart@mac.com / Skype:
> > nashtonhart
> > Online Bio: https://www.linkedin.com/in/ashtonhart
>
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